"Any story that’s going to be any good is usually going to change.” Alice Munro
A Writing Tool
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Pick up any first draft of a novel and it is likely littered with the verb "to be." There are more powerful and more artful ways to write. Here are three quick tricks to help you banish the word:
Get rid of the passive voice. Instead of she was waiting, try she waited.
Rearrange the phrase. Instead of the sun was orange, try the orange sun.
Pick a more active or descriptive verb. Instead of he was fast, try he sped.
While these examples are simple, they can be used with more complex sentences and will take your writing to the next level.
There's a Story Here: Pyrenees Mountains, Spain, 1999
What story would you write about this photo?
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